Hey honey,
It was a day which was sunny,
I found a gunny,
full of money!!!
There you came with your hair styled pony,
and made me come without taking a penny!
I then felt I got my love!
To you my life I owe!
Cuz, everywhere you go,
Its me with you, you tow,
With your show!!!
For me you looked like a nike,
Felt I got a 50% hike!
I had a like,
For your sharp nose like a parrots beak!
For your silky soft hair with a different streak!
As a whole you made me a Freak!!
I took my bike,
Roamed like a psych,
made you call me a tyke!
And one day you made my heart REEK,
When I wrote a letter,
To feel better,
Cuz you closed your shutter.
Was the reason, I had some liquor?
It was a day which was sunny,
I found a gunny,
full of money!!!
There you came with your hair styled pony,
and made me come without taking a penny!
I then felt I got my love!
To you my life I owe!
Cuz, everywhere you go,
Its me with you, you tow,
With your show!!!
For me you looked like a nike,
Felt I got a 50% hike!
I had a like,
For your sharp nose like a parrots beak!
For your silky soft hair with a different streak!
As a whole you made me a Freak!!
I took my bike,
Roamed like a psych,
made you call me a tyke!
And one day you made my heart REEK,
When I wrote a letter,
To feel better,
Cuz you closed your shutter.
Was the reason, I had some liquor?
(PART-1 Not for weak hearted)
Was the reason, I had some liquor?
Or that mother fucker,
Who came to lick her?
Hey bitch,
Why the fuck did you ditch?
You were the witch,
Who made me a lech!
But still you had an itch,
Which made you switch?
Life is a pearl,
Till u see a girl,
She’ll make you churl
& make you whirl!!!
-Sucha
25 comments:
tat s an amazing write up sucha.. jst mindblowin.. ;) .. tat s d way u write a "philosophical idea" in a freaky way..
hats off.!!!
Awesome buddy!!!!!!... those last 3 paragraphs took me out of the world...!!!! great job KAVINGNAR SUCHA....Ungal sevai,indha naatu pasangaluku thevey!!!!!!!!!
sucha its really great. i liked it very much. why dont you develop this talent. tell me how many days you took to write it..innime unnoda scene thangathu...but its worth putting scene..good da.. keep it up
Awesome da...Sucha the great.
I never thought such a poetic knowledge is there with sucha.Please express all ur talent da.. dont hide it away.. the poem is too goooooood
Its gud man keep it up now start doing Rap also it will be damm cool. All the Best
Gr8 man u had written only na..to rhyming how long does it takes u to write this..Gr8 work and in this to liquor plaz a imp role ha ha:)
sucha, nice try !!!
amazing !!!
keep it up !!!
Nice try...but its not upto his standard..sucha want to please readers by adding commercial items...especially in the last 3 paragraphs..
can u share me in which environment u wrote this poem???
Hey Sucha,
Gentlemen..... ippa pathingana sudarshan evalavu periya sagasam senjirukaru... For this i appreciate him... Sudarshan un pera nenaikumpodhu pull arikuthappa pullarikuthu.. Ippidi oru kavithai unakulla irukun yenn paa sollala yeenn??...
Really nice work sucha.. It will be more good if u avoid some words used in the poem.. All the best..
Vivek Srikanth.
Hey da... Tat was a nice poem but dnt use too much of flickin language... Try an Sonnet next time with kewl rhythm...
-luv
Prema
sucha - is it an outcome of a "Philo-sopher" or a summary of ur " Feel-of-suffer" (Love in short) As others pointed try to avoid those holy phrases ....
over all good Job .. amam nee en love failure pathi kavithai eluthra...
[ Note : Idha ver enga irundhavadhu suttu irundha ... romba damage aaiduva ]
Never knew u had it in u sucha..the poen was superb..vairamuthu junior..
not bad 2 start with as a blogger...but i wonder wat made u 2 finish it in such a way...any way all d best for future projects...next about marriage?
macha... cha english la evalo words therinju vechu erukka nu nenaikum bodhu enakku rombha perumaiya erukku da.... but i didn't like de second part...
coz it's gals aa dumb and jealous datz universal fact....
adu therinje dane nambha vilarom den y should v scold her!?
correct ah macha!?
excellent write up. Truely reflecting the inside out of you. Great attempt but just too short of the seriousness of the content..
hey sucha..... great goin...... keep the spirit up.. and write more....
aahaa hooho... amazing ... grt to see that you use ur time so well bringing out ur hiden talents.. wat else u have map pls bring them out...the poem was so funny and energetic.. ha ha.. keep it up and never stop writing ...
have fun!!!!
Ya this Poem ROCKS!!! nice RAPPING
Try to build a tune for it
Awesome!
Esp, the 2nd part is just too good.
This song can be sung as a rap da. Need to put some good music for this poem. We will do it once I learn drums ;-)
looks like you have poured out your agony in a form of this poem.
Let me do the honor of composing a rap around that. You rap it.
BTW, who is that ßitch you are talking about?
dat wuz aW$um buddy.. u'v bin walkn an Mpty road 4 long i gez..
Btw it was reely Mynd Blown .. I mean it. :-).. Do keep scribblin more :-P
I ll I ll :)
HA HA HA HA ...
I LOVED the end!
PERFECT Rap song ... Reminded me of Eminem :D
The disclaimer is very much wrong, cos, The things that you feel are things that you reel,
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